In the narrative, which is the best way to write the bold portion of sentence 13? (If the original is best, choose A.)
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Answer: A
No change: Correct. Verb tense: "felt" is past tense, matching "leaned" and "spread" in the same series and the past-tense narrative. The sentence is best as written.
feeling: Incorrect. "Feeling" is not a main verb, so the series "leaned, spread, and feeling" is not parallel and the last action loses its verb.
had felt: Incorrect. The past perfect would mean the floating happened before the leaning back, which reverses the order of events.
feels: Incorrect. Present tense "feels" shifts out of the past tense used throughout the narrative.
Keep verbs in the same tense unless the time of the action changes. In a past-tense story, a series of actions uses simple past forms.