TSIA2 Practice Test 4

10 free TSIA2 practice questions in the real exam format, covering the official content areas, with an explanation for every answer.

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Essay Revision and Editing

The following is an early draft of an essay arguing that cities should open tool-lending libraries.

Early draft

(1) Many households own a power drill that sits in a drawer for most of the year, along with a ladder that comes out only when the gutters overflow. (2) In a growing number of towns, residents have found a smarter alternative: the tool library. (3) A tool library works much like a book library, lending ladders, saws, and sewing machines to members for a small annual fee or for free. (4) Members reserve items online, pick them up at a neighborhood branch, and return them within a week. (5) Every mid-sized city should open one.

(6) The most obvious benefit is financial. (7) A homeowner who needs a tile cutter for one weekend project can borrow it instead of spending a hundred dollars on a tool that may never be used again. (8) Tool libraries also save space. (9) Apartment renters, in particular, rarely have room to store a wheelbarrow or a table saw. (10) My grandfather, who worked as a carpenter for forty years, kept more than a dozen hammers in his garage. (11) Finally, sharing tools keeps them out of landfills, because one well-maintained drill can serve dozens of families instead of just one, so fewer cheaply made tools end up broken and thrown away.

(12) Critics argue that borrowed tools will be broken or never returned. (13) Existing programs have found, however, that they are rarely a serious problem when members must register and sign a simple borrowing agreement. (14) Many libraries also offer free workshops on basic repairs and on how to use and care for equipment, so members learn to treat the tools with respect and return them in good condition. (15) A city that opens a tool library is not just lending equipment; it is building a community of people who know how to fix things and are willing to help their neighbors do the same.

In context, which phrase should replace the vague pronoun "they" in sentence 13 (reproduced below)?

(13) Existing programs have found, however, that they are rarely a serious problem when members must register and sign a simple borrowing agreement.